Friday, October 26, 2007

Who I Want To Be.....(my trial english essay)

Everyone is someone. No matter how bad you are,how useless you think you are, you are still someone. Someone that special in this world. Someone that makes this world special. I like to be myself because i think i am special. No one in this world is exactly like me. But,if i were given a chance to be anybody, the one i want to be sure is my best friend - Gim Aun.

Are you wondering why I would choose him but not someone is rich,famous,successful or well-known?? I also want to choose to be Brad Pitt to be as handsome he is, Bill Gates which is rich or Michelle Yoeh that are successful, but i don't know them as much as i know my best friend Gim Aun. Honestly, he is the almost prefect person i ever know!

The reason i want to be him is simple! He is just simply good! He good in everything. First of all, Lets tell about the physical appearance of Gim Aun. I think he do look good although he do not think so! He is handsome,cute and adorable. Many people like him as he look! If i am a girl, I'm sure will fall in love with him,because he look too handsome. He always seem to know what will look good on him,what won't, so you never will see the messing side of him!

As i mention just now,he is good. Not only the looking but result too. He is one of the smartest friend i have besides my other best friend,Pat Lin. Maybe i am stupid, i think that is the reason to i like to friend with smart people like him! I just want to be as smart as him! He is always get the highest mark in almost every subject, solving difficult math question just like eating a piece of cake, or writing an A plus essay within few minutes! He is just simply that smart! But, although he is smart, he do not act like other smart people that are always just pretend to be can't communicate with the stupid person like me! He is willing to teach people what he know!I always do not dare to stand beside him because he make me look much more stupid when people comparing us! But he always tutor me and when i ask him some stupid question.he still willing to answer me with patiently. No many people can be like him can stand my stupid question!

Besides that,he also a teacher pet in school. By saying this, i have no offense at all. It just proven that he is a good student that loved by all the teacher. When he do not come to school, the teacher will keep on asking us what happen to him! Do we know why he didn't come! Actually, sometime i am quite jealous with this situation, because no teacher can remember my name. Certain teacher still can called wrongly my name even she teach me for two year! I feel quite disappointed and sad but by having this famous friend like him make me feel a little bit better because at least teacher will remember as Gim Aun's friend. I don't mind at all when someone calling me like that but it kinda sad! I hope someday teacher will remember my name,nothing more, just remember my name! This become the other i want to be him.

Furthermore, he is a good friend. He know what to say,what to do at the right time and right time! He is a good advisor. He can always give you a good advise and make you go on to your life!When you fell blue, he is the one you can talk to because he will just listen to what you want to say and he won't interrupted. As much i can remember,he is the one who always say good things to me when i fell blue! He is not the kind of blabbermouth person, so everyone like to tell him the secret! including me!

He also can be a very funny person. He always like to say some joke to entertain his friends. He is just have the natural sense humour. It is also one of the reason i want to be him.For most of the girl, they like the guy that can make them smile. But i can't say Gim Aun got many girl friend like playboy because he is too shy! Sometime the shyness make him look much more cute!

He is a passionate person! He know what he want and he will try his best to achieve the best for himself. He is my inspiration of my life! Because of him, i think i should feel happy to what i having now, He is a brave person like Pat Lin. He dare to voice out his opinion when he do not agree with something or someone. This also one of the reason i want to be him . Voicing out your word is important, I do not dare to do so because of it is too hard for me,but for him it is just piece of cake. But sometime because of this,many people just don't like him. For me,if he just speaking the truth,why would us scare to listen or accept? People mind are too complicated to understand!

He always is the best among us. He care about everything even sometime i think he is care too much and become busybody already! No offence! It just that caring is good but when it become over,it become annoying.

He is an educated person. He will not easily come out with bad words. For me, it is good because living in this corrupted environment,it is so hard that not to be influence with the attitude of other person. He also always the one who saying sorry for us! Remember one time,when we almost having a fight with the other group of people, he keep on saying sorry and apologise for them to avoid the fight. It is sweet because he just care about his friend more them himself!

In addition, he always want to be perfect.Everything for him must be 100% perfect. This is him,Gim Aun. He also an independent person. He always do all the things by himself. He take care of himself with good, he do not need people to guide him for doing things. People trust him on everything. He just the person that can be trusted. Always the one who get the credit. haha..i am just kinding with this point! But he still always the one!

Lastly, if u ask me again who i want to be, my answer is still the same! If i see this question maybe after 10 years, i might still will write the same answer but that time the answer will be longer then this one because I'm sure he will be a better person in the future. Don't be surprised if next time my answer is 10 pages because he is just too good for me!

Although i can't be him, but u can be like him,so i going to learn from him and take his good as the inspiration to make my life and myself better!!

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Teacher comment: You have the points but be careful your tenses

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